GC series - FineStories

GC series - FineStories Show Details FromFineStories Feedback   [mailto:Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com]  Message from:  <> :

I have just completed reading the first 3 stories of your GC series. While there are some errors in grammar, spelling, and tense the plot was sound and remained exiting to read throughout. You have obviously worked very hard on this story for an unknown time. That shows. I am looking forward to learning more about Roy Masters and his currently absent family. I also cannot wait to see how you deal with the shadow agencies that threaten the Union from within. The war that has begun could spread like fire beyond the confines of the Union and the Kermac. I enjoyed your buildup of the civilizations of Earth. That was quite a bit of stringing together that you accomplished. My congratulations.

Write On!