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Subject: Galaxy at War

Hi VR,

I love your stories and am an avid reader of them on here, SOL and Finestories! I hate to say it but I have to agree that a rewrite would be good. I haven't posted any comments previously as others have already made the points I would have.

BUT!!! I love your stories and I eagily look forward to each chapter you post.

Thank you for sharing your work with us.

If you would like another editor, I would be happy to help with grammar and the occsional misspelled word I see. I would also be happy to sanity check chapters if it would help you.

Regards

Mark the Unruly