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On Galnet Data Base Wiki there is a chapter 12a with the note it belongs between 12 and 13 of Eric Ofalson

Midshipman.

While reading it I noticed that the first part of that chapter actually belonged between Chapters 11 and 12 - namely the scene ending with Admiral Stahl giving orders to Krabbel to get into a dress uniform and accompany him to the ball.

There is a short scene at the end of chapter 13 that would need to be changed with the new chapter as well - Eric mentions he didn't realize that Har Hi was present and wants to introduce him to Narth at the end of the ball and Har Hi wants to introduce Eric to his parents, but in 12a that happens right after Eric and Elfi arrive.

Rob