From: kaisersozzie

[ New Review ] for GC X(RW) Captain Olafson Show Details FromFictionPress   [mailto:Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com]  Vanessa Ravencroft,

A new review has been posted to your story.Story: GC X(RW) Captain Olafson Chapter: 7. PID-Mark 12

From: kaisersozzie ( http://www.fictionpress.com/u/860472/ ) Reply URL: https://www.fictionpress.com/pm2/post.php?rwid=17823005 ---

Great story re-write. Just noted that you called the robots on the tigershark Cerberus:

"SHIP dispatch ten marines full Surface Assault gear and five Cerberus robots to my location."

But in the previous book, chapter 13 you called them FENRIR Type I Battle Robots.

I Have been enjoying all the posts and rewrites of the story!

KS

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