Chapter: 9. Hyperspace

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Story: Galaxy at War Chapter: 9. Hyperspace

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Very nice however, kinda going overboard with situation after situation after situation with very little relative downtime between. It makes you wonder how someone can be that ridiculously into the middle of things. Give him a week or two of normality so he can get his needed school downloads or something, haha. At least Eric usually got a couple days between his adventures or hitting the dirt unless it was an ongoing action. I do look forward to the next update as always!

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