Review From: Elims (Guest)

FictionPress  Sep 23 at 6:53 PM To vanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Message body Vanessa Ravencroft,

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Story: 1) Adventures of a Greenie Chapter: 24. Chapter 24

From: Elims (Guest)

Elims:I love this story it is so fresh and full of vitality.

It starts with a slice-of-life family problem where Roys parents after being seriously neglectful in anything related to their child suddenly decide his life parth for him, almost daming what little relationship they have. This is set in the background of the most dangerous green planet in space.

Then you have the parallel arc of crime fiction that reaches into the highest aeons of intergalactic society. A forboding when coupled with the summery of just how bad Roys life will become.

Then Roy your not-quite-avarage teenage boy gets tangled in this criminal activity that is out of control and seemingly miraculously saves the day because he made good friends.

This is all underpinned by the mystery of Green Hell. For the scientists, Why is everything lethal? For the detective trio, what's so important that the big crime ring is tacking action there? For the criminals, why do all our plans get squashed/exposed there? And finally for Roy, Who is that girl?

There were parts that made me go [huh?] but the other reviews already pointed them out so i'll just say; This is a great story I can't wait to read more in Galaxy at War. Thank you.