Thread:Vanessa Ravencroft/@comment-39653646-20190818204821

The GC page where I posted the edited chapter:

https://galnet.fandom.com/wiki/Book_9_-_Chapter_25_-_Battle_Station_%28final_chapter%29_-_edited?venotify=created

I changed 2 sentences, I found them a bit confusing, you'll find them easily. 