Re: Eric Olafson, Fleet Cadet (GC VII) - Chapter 13: Mördaren

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Your story reminds me of the Horatio Hornblowerbooks by C.S. Forester and to some extent the Lensmen series by E.E. Doc Smith. Wonderful stories that are difficult to put down. To be critical you have some very obvious problems with continuity which your editor should have picked up. i.e number of cadets at Camp Idyllic and Peter Baker suddenly becomes Wulf; just to mention 2. I am greatly enjoying these adventures and do hope and encourage you to continue. As fast as possible please.

Congratulations on your work so far. You might consider submitting the series to Baen Books.

For your information I am a 67 year old retired English accountant currently living in the South of France.