FP Review Story: Captain Olafson GC X Chapter 14

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Story: Captain Olafson GC X

Chapter 14: Ambush

From: NeWBeE

Good Chapter. Brings a little more awesome adventure into your already "oh so adventurous" space opera! It was a pleasure to read the interactions and further developments on possibly helping the Ithe. The Dark One showing up a bit was the icing for my cake. I look forward to the next update!

PS: Don't forget to have the tank picked up Captain. lol --- 1) The Tank will be picked up in chapter 15

2) The funny look of the Ithe

3) The Dark One

4 ) NeWBeE, one of my oldest and dearest fans and friends. Comments faithfully and knows as much about "my" universe as I do.