Even if it is just a little bland

Re: The Adventures of a Greenie (GC IV) - Chapter 17 - [StoriesOnline] 1 recipientsCC: recipientsYou MoreBCC: recipientsYou Hide Details FROM:Anonymous  TO:vanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Message flagged Monday, October 29, 2012 1:21 PM

Continuity glitch..

Apparently Eric knows his parents died, and also did something heroic for the president...

I have reread several chapters but I can't work it out.

Maybe it is SOL taking time to notice the reposting of chapters you mentioned yesterday; maybe not.

I enjoy your writing, even if it is just a little bland.

I think the blandness is because the hero is never hurt in a meaningful way.. and the bad guys die in unfelt pain.

Of course I can not do better - and I still enjoy the story heaps.

regards --

Vanessa says: I wanted and want to create a Star Trek meets Friends kind of Universe. There will be a few darker stories but not in the "Main Lines"