Review for Space bus to Benton's Colony

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Story: Space bus to Benton's Colony Chapter: 6. Benton's Colony

From: dru83 ( http://www.fictionpress.com/u/669308/ ) Reply URL: https://www.fictionpress.com/pm2/post.php?rwid=17691509 ---

I really love chapter 6 with all its reveals. I like how you kept Baldy's death as a surprise to the reader. It's one of those things that makes the reader sit back and think about the story. As much as I loved Baldy's character, I love stories that don't have a 100% happy ending even more. You have a really awesome space western here and other than doing some extensive proof reading it's perfect.

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