Re: Space Bus to Benton's Colony - Chapter 4: Bumblebee

Re: Space Bus to Benton's Colony- Chapter 4: Bumblebee - [FineStories} Hide Details FromFineStories Feedback   [mailto:Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com]  Message from:  <[mailto:gjkezski@yahoo.com gjkezski@yahoo.com]> :

An odd but interesting story. Good internal continuity with a believable story flow. You are using a good number of classic archetypes but they all fit together well.

Jake