Greenie (GC IV) - Chapter 16

Re: The Adventures of a Greenie (GC IV) - Chapter 16 - [StoriesOnline]

FROM:Anonymous  TO:vanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Message flagged Saturday, October 27, 2012 5:19 AM

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I think that will be that buggers last words. Roy's pal is going to have some fun and a snack or two..

Nice clifhanger.. Will be waiting for the next part.....

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Message flaggedSaturday, October 27, 2012 1:13 AM Hi, I think you or the editor must have edited out/skipped some chunk of the story in chapter 16 on SOL Chapter 15 ends with the main protagonist just boarding and at the beginning of chapter 16 he has met and has something going on with a character never heard of before (cara), a bunch of things have happened to him etc. Should you repost the missing parts? Regards

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