New Review for GC X(RW)

[ New Review ] for GC X(RW) Captain Olafson Hide Details FromFictionPress   [mailto:Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com]  Vanessa Ravencroft,

A new review has been posted to your story.

Story: GC X(RW) Captain Olafson Chapter: 5. Deep Space

From: Aart Bluestoke ( http://www.fictionpress.com/u/647100/ ) Reply URL: https://www.fictionpress.com/pm2/post.php?rwid=17779016 ---

It's back, better than ever.

I was most disappointed when i got to the bottom of this chapter after a good large fix of new action, and discovered that there was no next button.

a quick question - was it your writings on the Kermac concerning Green Hell that prompted this re-write?

anyway, this rewrite helps the universe come to life by fleshing out this places with more detail, rounding out the characters, and improving an already interesting story. (and i'm sure a the few non-important or boring pieces of text will somehow disapear during this re-write).

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