From: Father Fixit

Adventures of a Greeni

From: Father_Fixit6/24/2018, 8:54:50 AM

Vanessa, let me say first, I loved the story you told in, Adventures of a Greeni. The story was very good but it was very hard to follow. I don't normally read stories that are broken up and jumping back and forth that way. The last half of the story was much easier to read and much more enjoyable. Placing the persons name at the beginning made it very clear where the story was going. I don't like to complain about someone's writing as I would be horrible at it. I did enjoy the writing and look forward to much more. Thank you for your donation to my enjoyment. Bob