Re: Spacebus to Benton's Colony - Prologue

From: MrBent7/26/2019, 7:38:05 PM

Q to you --

Do you invite proofing notes on your stories? I'm just starting in on 'Spacebus' and noticed,

The Shiss were affraid that this was the beginning -- 'affraid'

If you're receptive, I'll forward more if/when I spot 'em.

Benton 26jul19 --