The Karthanian Story - Comment

Maneeshkalera

I liked that in the rewrite you removed the piece about smelter moons and all the other adventures on karthanian world as i think it was deviating too much from main story of eric.

I am regularly checking your contributions page so I have just read ch.8.

Can you please give me the link to the karthanian story. i have read as far as black velvet captures a ship bound to smelter moon and freed the slaves with the help of ninety

The Karthanian Story stops at the point where Eric goes off to the Smelter Moons and Har-Hi is kidmapped by the Star Beast -  I have not written anything past that point.

The Itheam story will still be part of this rewrite but moved back after Eric defeated the Red Dragon.

I am adding new chapters now almost every day. Once this part is done I post it on Fiction Press.

thank you for reading and commenting