Friday, March 22, 2013 8:32 PM



From: Dorm Dad 

To: "vanessaravencroft@yahoo.com" 

Sent: Friday, March 22, 2013 8:32 PM

Subject: A gift

Vanessa,

I have lost your email...I think you and I were corresponding. It has been a while. Just in case a form of latent memory loss for my side is operating I go by the username of DormDad. I used to edit for those authors who wished me to look at their work. I have retired, but saw your epic and could not keep my hands off. I truly apologize if I have stepped over any lines. I am including with this email the edited Chapter 9. As I said to your PM on Fictionpress you are under no constraint to use it. This is a gift from me to you. If you do not want it...delete it. I tried to smooth your story out for you to make it flow better in spots. I urge you to read it if you decide that this crazy old editor has a point.

Again, If I overstepped my bounds I apologize. Just keep writing!

As I used to end my letters to my authors...Write ON!

DormDad