Re: Space Bus to Benton's Colony - Chapter 6: Benton's Colony

Re: Space Bus to Benton's Colony - Chapter 6: Benton's Colony - [StoriesOnline] Show Details FromKarl   [mailto:Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com] Message from: Karl :

This whole series of yours is a fabulous space opera. There are thousands of punctuation and grammar errors but it is still a magnificent saga.

Here is one procedural error that you might want to fix. Others have probably mentioned it to you.

Chapter 6

"Peacock folded his hands and a deep smile curled his lips."

In Chapter 5 Peacock had his right arm burned off.

Thanks for sharing this wonderful work with us.

Karl