From: pinghansen

Adventures of a greenie. Problems

From: pinghansen6/24/2018, 4:44:41 AM

I do enjoy your stories very much, but you do have some problems you need to address. Please take a look at what you have posted. You have at least two out of sequence postings and double postings of chapters.

Also do a search for 'major' in the chapters before leaving green hell, and replace with 'mayor".

You do need a couple of proofreaders.