Talk:New Edit Roy 7

inconsistency :

The sight of unprotected human juveniles outside and accompanied by a Moolax spider, a young Water Snake and a sizable black Beast , which no one who saw it could identify; silenced the last mumbled comment.

comment to what ? originally there was an paragraph with the ranger speaking before this one. but its missing in this edit.

Gnume (talk) 09:49, November 28, 2013 (UTC)