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Subject: i was reading

Vanessa, I was reading on another site--maybe finestories or storiesonline and they had a part of your series there. It did not have the complete story of chapter 9 though. I guess you are editing? Anyway I am re-reading on fictionpress and as usual the plot is excellent. I wish I could help you with some of the issues you have, but have yet to respond to my first 'editing' attempt. I suppose that you did not like it. No harm done. Hopefully you will forgive my impertinence in editing it for you. Write On! DormDad

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