John Vilnis on Ch 17

John Vilnis Well she gets kidnapped again but at least this time she isn't knocked unconscious. Lumis shows how absolutely dumb he is and how obnoxious and full of himself he is at the same time. Ciferus is much more intelligent and dangerous. The Necros are starting to really interfere and if they aren't careful we know of someone that will teach them a harsh lesson. Oh hell, they are already playing with fire and the flames of darkness will burn them badly. And yet again a fantastic chapter. Thanks Vanessa.

Dear John,

Always love your take of things. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Vanessa