New Review for Adventures of a Greenie 2

New Review for Adventures of a Greenie 1 recipientsCC: recipientsYou More FROM:FictionPress TO:vanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Message flagged Thursday, August 2, 2012 1:08 AM Vanessa Ravencroft,

A new review has been posted to your story.

Story: Adventures of a Greenie Chapter: 12. Chapter 11

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 * Take your time VR with out trying there are two typos in this chapter. Your

writting has improved a great deel you now use words that mean something short sweet and tasty to read.

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