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Message flagged Wednesday, July 18, 2012 2:00 AM

Name: jmangan68 Profile: http://www.fictionpress.com/u/856653/

Subject: GC VIII Ch 7

Love your stories. Saw them on SOL an saw the blog entry about fiction press so came over here to read them faster. In the last paragraph of Ch 7 you have Adm Stahl tell Eric to report to Deck 56 but the next chater is titled Deck 54. Saw a similar thing when he was lifting off in the test ship earlier or in GC VII the berth listed by the Adm is different from the one Erc request clearance to lift off from. Minor issues I know but from the history of comments to authors on SOL it will be noticed there.

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