Rene Kener edits Ch02

Rene Kener

I did my homework and sent the usual messages, Miss Vanessa. Please look and choose between whips or wisps. Thanks.

Dear Rene,

I don’t know what it is but when you write ‘Miss Vanessa’ I hear a French accent and I find it so delightful.

As for the choice of words: It would be wisps.

And thank you for your edits as always.

I am on the road and answering via phone. I will apply your edits tonight.

Vanessa