Story Reviews :Hidden Deserts review of Ch. 10 Book X

Since I can’t answer to readers reviews openly in Fiction Press. I am going to use this media to do so. I always answer readers reviews personally and directly, but sometimes the readers raise valid points or ask questions that could be interesting for other readers as well.

Some of the comments and critiques have caused me to rewrite entire chapters and others have led to lasting friendships.

Here is a review of Hidden-dessert 2011-10-09 . chapter 12

I have time to review again! Finally! Unfortunately, I may not be able to do my superlong reviews until winter break. I cannot begin to express how great this series is. I just found out that one of my friends has been reading this too, though he's really behind, last time I checked he was still reading GCVII. Shame, because when I finally thought I had someone to talk to (read as: "OMG this is awesome let's discuss the plot of an awesome book which ISN'T HP, like the nerds that we are."), and I can't talk to him about it because i don't want to spoil it. Sucks.

On another note, I thought the reason Eric had a dual gender identity was because he had the essence of duality, not because thegiant whale guy (crap I forget his name) "inserted a female spirit". Wasn't it in his Psych evaluation from day one, meaning it was in his DNA? I'm confused.

Ooh, the plot thickens.

He bought the planet! Why didn't I think of that?

How much money does Eric have anyway?

Yes Eric, you ARE the magnet. Trouble to your north pole, friends to the south; shrouded in weirdness all around. The Olafson gang needs to have a theme song (or at least Eric does). That would be both awesome and hilarious!