New Review for Galaxy at War -35-

New Review for Galaxy at War Show Details FromFictionPress   [mailto:Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com]  Vanessa Ravencroft,

A new review has been posted to your story.

Story: Galaxy at War Chapter: 10. NOTE TO MY READERS

From: Jose (Guest) ---

Jose:You are correct that you need to do a rewrite. Overall this story line is far better than any of your other stories, but you seem to be rushing it after a great start. I would like to see long chapters and more details of his life. He is the hero and the Kermac should not control him that easy. You did a great job adding partner to the mix.

Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed every chapter and looked forward to the next chapter. You do a great job on cliff hangers at the end of each chapter.

Look forward to the rewrite of Roy Masters.

Thanks, Jose