New Review for Eric Olafson, Fleet Cadet GC VII

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Story: Eric Olafson, Fleet Cadet GC VII 15. Lorman's Starbase

From: John Walker pse (Guest) ---

John Walker pse:I like the story. I'm reading part of it for the second time-I started over at storiesonline and am continuing here.

I am old. I used to read a lot of science fiction, but now I do it much more rarely. I am intrigued wondering how you came up with this story-to me it is unique (well, it reminds me in many ways of the old Dune trilogy), but I suspect it is not as unique as I think, but the uniqueness is more a consequence of my hiatus from reading science fiction.

I'd be interested in your thoughts.

I will be busy for a while, but am thinking about volunteering to edit the story for you. I know you have another editor, but without having captured any examples, he has missed some things.

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Hi John,

welcome to the club then..I am old too..;-) I don't knowif my stories are unique or not, but I think they are indeed mine. I am sure I have a long way to go before I can compare myself with Frank Herbert (Dune) but if you do see similarities then I am very pleased and proud. I have a Google Share Site where I keep the documents. If you like I can give you access and can start a folder and also see what the other editor does. Thank you for taking the time and writing a review and sending me a note. I truly appreciate that.

Sincerely

VR