New Review for NILFEHEIM -4-

New Review  for NILFEHEIM Show Details FromFictionPress   [mailto:Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com]  Vanessa Ravencroft,

A new review has been posted to your story.

Story: NILFEHEIM Chapter: 4. Mother

From: jeffs87 ( http://www.fictionpress.com/u/892589/ ) Reply URL: https://www.fictionpress.com/pm2/post.php?rwid=17794723 ---

The only critisism I have is that you should use indentations at the start of a new paragraph.

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