Re: Eric Olafson, Neo-viking (GC V) - Chapter 16: Swine and Dine

Re: Eric Olafson, Neo-viking (GC V) - Chapter 16: Swine and Dine - [FineStories} Show Details FromAnonymous   [mailto:Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com]  An Excellent chapter & I Applaud his behavior & actions in the restaurant. I had to snicker when he realized what his uncle had in mind for his little tour around town.

A minor error, after the battleship left there was a conversation with a mixup in names. You stated "Uncle Ragnar untied his apron" where it should have been Uncle Hogun.

Jake