Friday, July 6, 2012 5:24 PM

Re: Xeno Activity - Chapter 7 - from Story Line

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Message flagged Friday, July 6, 2012 5:24 PM Message from: David

Interesting story and well written, spoilt only by a very few proofing errors. I'm interested as to where this one goes...

David (aka bachgen)