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[ New Review ] for Adventures of a Greenie Show Details FromFictionPress   [mailto:Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com]  Vanessa Ravencroft,

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Story: Adventures of a GreenieChapter: 24. Chapter 24

From: deformed beauty ( http://www.fictionpress.com/u/629537/ ) Reply URL: https://www.fictionpress.com/pm2/post.php?rwid=17788426 ---

I really liked the story and I love the characters. I'm happy you're going to continue it because the plot is awesome. I hope to read about when Roy gets to his school and his time there, and if there's going to be more mysterious plots there as well. I just really hope that you get a Beta for this story because I like it, but it makes me allergic to all the typos and I try not to cringe everytime I see a sentence that need to be deconstructed and rebuilt. Just keep up the good work and please get a Beta :D

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