Thread:Vanessa Ravencroft/@comment-58.160.180.67-20161225155617/@comment-4082020-20161225161719

The episode with the cloak still happened. I omitted it from the current sequence of chapters as the story of the Dark One is told from Eric's perspective. He has forgotten it at that point and thisis why it is not mentioned, it will be retold and he will remember it in ann upcoming chapter in the next book. I feel it is only a plothole because you know the entire story. It should not be a plot hole but just a mystery that presents itself to a "new reader" in the final published version of the stories.

Stahl will still marry, but in a slightly different version of the events and after the Dark One has risen.

Yes the Star Demon plot serves several purposes, introducing Lord Lumis and the Knights of light, giving Har Hi a chance to go to Thana Shoo, revealing the origin of the Dai Than and the real reason Thana Shoo was destroyed and the origin of the Non Corps.

Spoiler: Yes the Red Dragon will be killed, the Celtest/Seenian depot will be found. The mystery why the Red Dragon knows about the depot.

I also introduced a Snake that became member of the Tigershark crew, he came aboard while they were in the secret Sun station.

The Sun station is the hook for a new sub storyline (The Tribunal conspiracy).

But first and foremost I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for your critique, your insights and your observations. I am sometimes too cose to the story to see the plot holes and mistakes. The Inkitt editor is great, but she does not know the story and only comments and corrects spelling, grammar, sentence structure and so forth.

I tried to answer your questions before but your comments that were forwarded from Inkitt to me had no contact information at all.

You can always reach mere here or via my email: vanessaravencroft@yahoo.com

Make sure you send me a mailing address, Inkitt will make 100 printed copies availabe by the end of February for me to give away.

VR