Re: The Adventures of a Greenie (GC IV) - Chapter 20

Re: The Adventures of a Greenie (GC IV) - Chapter 20 - [FineStories} Show Details FromFineStories Feedback   [mailto:Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com]  Message from:  <> :

You need a proof reader !!!! Great story, but you write like you are someone from another star system. You type the words of your story too fast. You mix up the letters of words. of should be off, hse should be she, 7,62 should be 7.62... You need a proof reader badly. my name is leslie, i am 60 years old. my email address is Please keep telling your story, only slow down your typing. thank you