New Review for GC X(RW) Captain Olafson 4

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Story: GC X(RW) Captain Olafson Chapter: 7. PID-Mark 12

From: Sean (Guest) ---

Sean:While I like the chapter, they technically invaded an unknown world. It could have been just a society defending that and they don't even attempt communication? Seems wierd. And it should be Fenris robots I think. And if it had already accepted a shut down command, why would it reverse it because it got shot? The computronic was still on and connected to fleet command since it verified Eric is a captain

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