Thread:Vanessa Ravencroft/@comment-24949836-20140624200135

I liked that in the rewrite you removed the piece about smelter moons and all the other adventures on karthanian world as i think it was deviating too much from main story of eric.

I am regularly checking your contributions page so I have just read ch.8.

Can you please give me the link to the karthanian story. i have read as far as black velvet captures a ship bound to smelter moon and freed the slaves with the help of ninety 