I apologize if I sounded a little snarky

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I apologize if I sounded a little snarky in my complaint to you about the speed of your posting. On reflection it was out of order, brought about solely by my eagerness to go on with the story. This only happens when I am really enjoying a book or story and am forced to put it down or stop reading.

It may be the wrong phrase here, considering the medium you use, but your stories are a real "page turner".

I wasn't sure about the direction that you had Eric take (bringing out his feminine side) but you did manage to hold my interest and in your round about way, and the clues I picked up, realise that the journey was as important, if not more-so, than the destination.

I really enjoy Roy's story, and have not started reading the new one yet. I want to wait until you have 15 or so chapters before I dive into it.

As for doing the re-writes, I have to admit that some of the stories need it. This is something I do have a problem with, not just you but many American authors, I was brought up in the UK and so my brain thinks in the Queen's English. (Although using words like there instead of their for possessions etc, and others like it, really bounce on my "pet-peve" nerves.

Out of all the...

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