Thread:Vanessa Ravencroft/@comment-124.176.117.49-20150725132104/@comment-58.160.180.67-20161008180123

What happened to the edit that was being done to the story last year? I've been reading the story as posted on inkitt.com and there are still a lot of spelling mistakes that need to be cleaned up. An example is in chapter 9 Checkpoint 96 you keep on changing between calling it Checkpoint 96 and Checkpoint 98. It's a small mistake but it upsets the flow of the story as I keep on thinking they are refering to a different checkpoint outpost.

I'm happy to see that it did so well in the competition and hope to see it cleaned up and published. Do you know what the publishing options are? I stopped buying dead tree books a couple of years ago and only buy elewctronic books now. I hope some form of electronic version is an option.

Are you still working on continuing the series? To me the last chapter as posted on inkitt.com doesn't close off enough of the plots and it reads as if there should be other chapters after it.

The series has a lot of potential but still seems to need a lot of work in the editing. It still has a lot of spelling mistakes and inconsistent references to places, and in parts of the story incorrect spelling of names of people from the Olafson Gang. In other places you can't even tell when someone is speeking because of left out quotation marks.

Still needs work but I hope to see it cleaned up so that I can buy a copy. As it stands now I'm not sure if I would buy it in its current form due to how hard it can be read make sense of when reading.