This was really a great story

Review: 1) Adventures of a Greenie FictionPress Nov 4 at 12:56 PM To vanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Message body Vanessa Ravencroft ,

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Story: 1) Adventures of a Greenie Chapter: 24. Chapter 24

From: bleme ( https://www.fictionpress.com/u/1073975/ )

This was really a great story. It has immersive details, but doesn't get bogged down with them, which is a very hard balance. It has some very inspiring and powerful characters, that still face significant conflict. It has twists and surprises. My only complaint is a very small one in that it needs a proofreader. It has several punctuation errors and many typos like 'he' that should be 'the' but pass a simple spell-checker but they are only mildly distracting as you can usually tell what the author meant to type.

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