From: Crystallea1321

New Review for Adventures of a Greenie 1 recipientsCC: recipientsYou More FROM:FictionPress TO:vanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Message flagged Tuesday, August 21, 2012 4:54 PM Vanessa Ravencroft,

A new review has been posted to your story.

Story: Adventures of a Greenie Chapter: 7. Chapter 6

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This is really interesting, I love the plot line! Just please go over this again looking for extra words or words that repeat, it needs some editing and then it would be amazing! Now I have to keep reading!

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