From: kiki19857

New Review ] for Adventures of a Greenie

A new review has been posted to your story.

Story: Adventures of a Greenie Chapter: 10. Chapter 9

From: kiki19857

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after reading your summary, I'm kinda sad that Roy's parents is going to die since in your new chapters, Roy ran away instead of reconciling with his parents. Thus if he's running away and those bad people come and killed his parents, Roy might not have any chance of reconciliation. I did remember in your old chapter that Roy did reconciled with his parents and I really liked this part and it made me want to read more :)