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[ New Review ] for Adventures of a Greenie 1 recipientsCC: recipientsYou MoreBCC: recipientsYou Hide Details FROM:FictionPress   TO:vanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Message starred Friday, November 30, 2012 1:32 AM Vanessa Ravencroft,

A new review has been posted to your story.

Story: Adventures of a Greenie Chapter: 22. Chapter 22

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So, evil Kermac, good Roy, and Phil! Now all we need is Partner and the show can get started. But where is he? I want Partner back! Did he go to get the one who is good death? I shall be cryptic so as not to spoil this for others who are not that far in other stories. Also, there is a spot where you put Saresii instead of Kermac. It was where he said, "The Secret Translocator Technology!" or something dramatic like that. Well, give me a new chapter soon. I'll be waiting.

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