Re: GH-11 edits

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TO:Vanessa Ravencroft Message flagged Saturday, August 11, 2012 1:01 PM

Thanks. I figured the --""-- was some kind of break based on you using it later, but the coding did not match the later uses so I left that comment. I wasn't sure about the capitalization as you've been doing it throughout and even though I'd "corrected" prior chapters, I thought maybe it was some affect in speech/language you were trying to project to the reader, since those suggestions did not appear in the posting on SOL. If you want, I can go back through and suggest corrections on this chapter too regarding the capitalization. Let me know if you want to do it or want me to look at it again. Take care, Don

From: Vanessa Ravencroft To: Don Sent: Saturday, August 11, 2012 1:27 AM Subject: Re: GH-11 edits

I see what you mean. I didn't even realize I was doing it. No I don't want them to be capitalized and I am going to fix it. This : --""-- I used as a break to denote a new segment.

--""--

So readers know its a different segment,but not a new chapter. It somehow deleted the line breaks and made no sense...;-)

VR

From: Don To: Vanessa Ravencroft Sent: Saturday, August 11, 2012 4:31 AM Subject: Re: GH-11 edits