Your galactic cronicales storie

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hello,

ok, I like your series, I love the way you can make them live and breath, even if some of them don't really breath, the whole thing has a good ring and thrill to it, I am only hoping, after reading the last two incomplete stories that your going to finish them?

you have a great story line, two cross related stories (well more than that if you count the internal stories) and a great line of races in a dynamic universe. I'm a role playing game writer and I could take some lessons from your universe!

please, finish it and please go back and fill in the missing information of the stories.

one last note, I think... you have an oops in your numbering, unless there is a book missing as of yet, the roman numeration of book 3,  4 and five seem off I think three being III, not IV (that's four) and on from that point.

hope to find that you have added stuff soon,

inthaneelf