Thread:Vanessa Ravencroft/@comment-58.160.180.67-20161225155617/@comment-58.160.180.67-20161225165404

Thanks Vanessa for the response.

I'm glad to see that you were already aware of the potential issue with what I saw as a plot hole, but you are already planing to take care of the issue.

I would like to thank you for accepting the feedback even though it is your right as the author to take the story where you want. After spending way too much time on Galnet going through storylines and articles (I've read each version of the Eric story from the Galnet 1990's version to now) I believe that I can say that I have some idea where old storylines were going. Or at least some of the major events that you had planned or wrote artciles about.

Interesting to see where things go with Stahl being with the Tigershark crew.

Storylines change and you have new directions that you want to push the story and I agree that giving people a view of the potential power Dark One early left a big hole in the sense that Narth Supreme and all that is Narth are nothing when compared to the Dark One.

I'll send you my details via email as I'm happy to give feedback. Are the chapters on Inkitt "final" or still to be edited? I've noticed a few things I would like to comment on but they are likely to have been picked up by your editor already.