Huh Humm Review Galaxy at War

Huh Humm chapter 9. 31m ago

I enjoyed you first Roy masters story but now I'm a bit confused. I don't understand the necessity behind this past/present duo plot. Originally I thourght the original 'present' intro was just that, a long intro where you showed what privileged cheat like powers/position Roy has. Going to the past is where the main story would take place, were we would discover how Roy receieved his athorities, skills and trainings. It would eventually merge with the prologue then continue to the climax.

This chapter, while very interesting and well plotted on its own, proves me wrong and leaves me confused.

Wasn't I about to read the epic story of Roys serch for his parents? How he goes from unschooled teen to crack commando? Then how he became an Honorary Pariah and also received his special clearance? Along the way learning all those things that made him a greater person? And maybe some patience if he hasn't rescued his parents by the time the story rejoins the intro.

Then we have the flash forward that sets up this huge expectancy toward the persent time line. Clearly past/present both have there own story bait now so whitch one is the main plot? Past is the teens struggle to find his parents/growing up and present is suddenly trouble with the army, a security breach of massive proportions that could lead to the loss of the war that previously was in the bag for a win with a little bit of being framed (possibly) given the secret service has just come knocking.

Both the past/present plot lines are good but they don't really match well for duo reading. If the Past is meant to be flashback then it is way too long and detailed. If not I have little idea whats going on and can only sit back for the ride and wait for the great reveal latter on. Where is author-sama's plot taking me?

This is a great stand alone chapter for fast paced action. We go from 0 to 70 in 0.01seconds. Basic Recon mission that was about to simply end suddenly becomes fatally dangerous when prototype Machines go bad. A sudden confidential conference reveals they may even be illegal weapons and theres been a big cover up. While still considering what this means the secrete services suddenly appears and that never a good thing.