Re: Galaxy at War (GC) - Chapter 8: Hyperspace - FineStories

Re: Galaxy at War (GC) - Chapter 8: Hyperspace - FineStories Show Details FromFineStories Feedback   [mailto:Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com Tovanessaravencroft@yahoo.com]  Message from:  <[mailto:jim7@fastmail.us jim7@fastmail.us]> :

A rewrite is a good idea. The STORY is good, depending on how you plan the rest of the plotline; but the editing and the proofing is not the best.