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Story: Captain Olafson GC X
Chapter 14: Ambush
From: NeWBeE
Good Chapter. Brings a little more awesome adventure into your already "oh so
adventurous" space opera! It was a pleasure to read the interactions and
further developments on possibly helping the Ithe. The Dark One showing up a
bit was the icing for my cake. I look forward to the next update!
PS: Don't forget to have the tank picked up Captain. lol
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1) The Tank will be picked up in chapter 15
2) The funny look of the Ithe
3) The Dark One
4 ) NeWBeE, one of my oldest and dearest fans and friends. Comments faithfully and knows as much about "my" universe as I do.